Evaluative Comments
As a whole, an improved package upon the Train Misses. However, items to be improved include:
Sound - Again, a microphone is needed on the piece to camera. Also, the vox pops needed audio gain.
Setting - The setting for the studio link is better than the Train Misses package, but still needs to be improved as the lighting is still not fantastic. Although, in some respects, having natural light in the piece is positive.
Titling - When quoting Brian Connell, the titling used to illustrate the text was dull, with black and white not being effective in this instance.
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